The taste of Beijing
The taste of Beijing is sweet.
Ice-sugar gourd,Soybean-flour and Cake Glutinous rice ball ,all of these are Beijing's characteristic snacks that are sweet.
Ice-sugar gourd is made of Hawthor which are covered with sugar that is golden.It is sweet and a bit sour.Soybean-flour is Glutinous Rice Rolls with Bean paste that is one of the oldest breed .As the Beijing snack.,they are all sweet.
not only is the food sweet there but the feeling of living in Beijing is also sweet,because all of the Beijing’ person are kind and helpful.
The people of Beijing are willing to help others.They are warm-hearted and they help others .So all the things in Beijing is nice,I like Beijing and I advise you to vist the beautiful city ,and i dare say you will fall in love with it too.
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The taste of Beijing
The taste of Beijing is sweet.
Ice-sugar gourd,Soybean-flour ,Cake Glutinous rice ball which are the Beijing characteristic snacks is sweet.
Ice-sugar gourd is almost made of Hawthor which are covered sugar that are golden.It is sweet and a little sour.Soybean-flour is Glutinous Rice Rolls with Bean paste that is one of the oldest breed ,being a Beijing snack.They are all sweet.
The feeling of living in Beijing is sweet,too,because of Beijing’ person.
The people of Beijing is willing to help others.They are warm-heart that they help others without name patiently.They does not exclude outsiders.
题目就是“the taste of beijing”裸题、
希望大家多帮我改改啊、还有字数不太够、还能加些什么东西~
The taste of Beijing
The taste of Beijing is sweet.
Ice-sugar gourd,Soybean-flour ,Cake Glutinous rice ball which are the Beijing characteristic snacks is sweet.
Ice-sugar gourd is almost made of Hawthor which are covered sugar that are golden.It is sweet and a little sour.Soybean-flour is Glutinous Rice Rolls with Bean paste that is one of the oldest breed ,being a Beijing snack.They are all sweet.
The feeling of living in Beijing is sweet,too,because of Beijing’ person.
The people of Beijing is willing to help others.They are warm-heart that they help others without name patiently.They does not exclude outsiders.
题目就是“the taste of beijing”裸题、
希望大家多帮我改改啊、还有字数不太够、还能加些什么东西~
英语人气:437 ℃时间:2020-06-02 23:23:43
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