帮我修改一篇我的英语考场作文
帮我修改一篇我的英语考场作文
这里是我的一篇英语考场小作文,我得了9分,有什么不对的地方帮我改一下,提点建议吧!
The School Life
Mary's school life is very interesting.From Monday to Friday,she has seven classes every day.Such as English,Matn,
Chinese and some other subjects.English is her favorite subject,
because it's easy and interesting.After school,she always does
some outdoor activities.Monday and Wednesday,she plays soccer
with her classmates on the playground.Tuesdday and Thursday,she goes swimming in the swimming pool.Every Friday,she often reads
books in the school library.Sometimes,she plays compurter games
in the compurter room.
She likes her school life very much.
这里是我的一篇英语考场小作文,我得了9分,有什么不对的地方帮我改一下,提点建议吧!
The School Life
Mary's school life is very interesting.From Monday to Friday,she has seven classes every day.Such as English,Matn,
Chinese and some other subjects.English is her favorite subject,
because it's easy and interesting.After school,she always does
some outdoor activities.Monday and Wednesday,she plays soccer
with her classmates on the playground.Tuesdday and Thursday,she goes swimming in the swimming pool.Every Friday,she often reads
books in the school library.Sometimes,she plays compurter games
in the compurter room.
She likes her school life very much.
英语人气:457 ℃时间:2020-06-09 01:22:31
优质解答
谈点自己的看法吧其实已经写得很好了,条理清楚,思路清晰1Matn,Tuesdday应该是打上来打错的吧,不说了2总结的时候可以提一句,That's Mary"s interesting school life and she enjoys it very much3and sometimes,she w...
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