my past life 英语作文 60 字

I was born in a village of Zhejiang.The village wasn’t big,but it was beautiful and clean.There was a big garden with some trees and a pond.There were many fishes in the pond.On weekends,children often played there.Near the garden,it was my first school----NO.2 MIDDLE School.Dining hall was in the north of the school.In front of the dining hall there was a small park.After meal,it was the best to play.My first teacher was Mr PAN.SHe was 39 .He was friendly and interesting,but he sometimes was strict with us.At that time,my best friends were Zhou Huiming and Ye Xia.They were out-going and very naughty.I loved them very much.
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