英语翻译

英语翻译
Good afternoon,ladies and gentlemen,my name is * * *,I am a student from Jinjiang River middle school.Today I want to lecture is entitled "my future isn't a dream."
Like the song "my future is not a dream."I love sing every time will give me confidence songs.I believe that all our dreams can come true,if we have the courage to pursue.
When I was young my father always asked me,I would be what.Sometimes,I find it very hard to give a certain reply."I want to be a doctor." "I want to be a teacher." And "I want to be a scientist!Many of these answers are perhaps very childish and ridiculous.But I don't think they are far away.
Time is passing so fast.Who is able to give a definition to his future?I know clearly that those high buildings are based on solid foundation.As a student,I should have a reasonable aim,and study hard.My goal is to enter the best university for further study.I know it's hard work,and I 'll come across many difficulties and frustrations.But whatever it is,I will study hard,never give up.Only one kind of people that my teacher said is truly successful:those who are brave enough to face difficulties,and to try to overcome.
Come on,I'll try my best to overcome any obstacle,in my future,and positive competition,improve their.
I'm sure my future is not a dream!
下午好 女士们先生们 我的名字是×××,我是来自晋江市子江中学的一名学生.今天我要演讲的题目是《我的未来不是梦》 就像歌里唱的“我的未来不是梦.“我爱每次唱的时候都会带给我信心的歌曲.我相信我们所有的梦想可以成真,如果我们有勇气去追求.当我小的时候我的父亲总是问我,将来我会是什么.有时候,我发现很难给予一定的答复.“我想成为一名医生.”“我想成为一名老师.”和“我想成为一名科学家!许多这些答案也许是非常幼稚和可笑的.但我不认为他们是遥远的.
时间过得真快!谁能给定义他的未来?我清楚地知道那些高的大厦是建立在坚实的基础.作为一个学生,我应该有一个合理的目标,并且努力学习.我的目标是进入最好的大学进一步学习.我知道这是艰难的工作,并且我将遇到许多困难和挫折.但不管是什么,我会努力学习,不要放弃.我的老师说的只有一种人是真正成功:那些有足够勇气去面对困难,并尽力克服.
来吧,我会尽力克服任何障碍,将在我未来的发生,并且积极的竞争,提高自己.
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好吧,感觉错误有点多额,我不是什么砖家,只是想说说自己的看法,楼主不喜勿喷哈.开头的初中翻译可以大写,Jingjiang River Middle School,后面那个句子语法错了,Today I want to lecture已经是个句子了,楼主还在后面加i...谢谢你。 其他的都还行吗?后面的When I was yong…be what,,个人觉得可以改成When Iwas young my father always asked mewhatI want to be in the future,可能表达的不是太好,但觉得楼主的表达前半句是父亲在说,后半句又是以第一人称来问,不太好,可以试试改一下。,,然后我说的时态不到位就是这后面了,你这个sometimes应该是针对小时候的吧,但是你完全用了现在时。再后面个人觉得那个Many of可以换成Most of ,,,后面的那个说 我不认为他们是遥远的有点中国式英语的感觉,不过我也找不到什么不对的地方。再后面表达时光匆匆的句子其实不用进行时的,一般时态就行了,比如time goes fast,这应该有英语习语的,楼主可以百度一下。。。再到后面But whatever it is建议改成复数,,,到最后positive competition 不知道和前面的句子是否可以联系。。大概我只能说说这些了吧,不过我是按照书面语来想的,楼主既然是演讲就没有必要太刻意于语法,刻意口语化一些,尽量让听众听懂。。。就说这么多了吧,楼主自己感觉感觉就好了,个人觉得楼主写得蛮不错的,句子运用的很好,但是内容有些空,不过是英语,这没什么要紧的。。该怎么感谢你呢,你是晋江人吗,有时间一起吃顿饭。!!呵呵,没事额,我只是喜欢给人家答问题罢了,我在合肥上学额,,∩_∩
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