how to improve students' mental health part2 求指点语法错误

the efforts both universities and students themselves
应该是the efforts of
the staff number of the counseling center 应该是the number of the staff in the counseling center should be enlarged
On the part of universities 应该是 In terms of universities
face the reality life and find out the causes of depression 应该是face the reality and find out the causes of their depression.
On the student's part应该是 In terms of the student's
Expect above 应该是In addition to the above,
students should commuicate more with their friends,teachers and parents,find betterr ways to cope with and solve problems,and set realistic aims for their life.
应该是students should commuicate more with their friends,teachers and parents.They should try to find better ways to deal with their problems and then solve them.Also,they should set realistic goals for their future life.
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