英语高手来看Open the window to make the air in your room clean 这个句子有错么?

没错,只是累赘,不符合英语习惯.
分析：祈使句.to make the air in your room clean 是目的状语,in your room 是介词短语做定语,修饰air,clean 又是air的补足语.若改为下列句子更好：Open the window to air your room