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请找出下面这篇短文的错误,最好详细点.
Dear John
I am very happy hear you will come Beijing.I can give some suggest to you.About study,at first you should make good use of time.It is a very important way of improve your grades.If you are well worth saving time you will get more knowledge in the same time.Then you also should learn by yourself berore teacher teach you.After class you must do some homework.If you have some questions about study you'd better ask for your teacher.About life,you couldn't saty up too late.You should keep full sleep so that you can't sleep at classes.
Yours
Li Hua

英语人气：281 ℃时间：2020-06-08 10:41:44

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Dear John
I am very happy hear you will come to Beijing.I can give some suggestions to you.About study,at first you should make good use of time.It is a very important way to improve your grades.If you are well worth saving time you will get much knowledge in the same time.Then you also should learn by yourself berore teacher teach you.After class you must do some homework.If you have some questions about study you'd better ask your teacher.About life,you couldn't stay up too late.You should keep full sleep so that you won't sleep at classes.
Yours
Li Hua谢谢。I can give some suggestions to you.to可不可以换成for?可以的

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