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Hello Everyone,
Thank you all for providing me with this excellent opportunity,with my great honor,to stand on this stage,for an election campaign to be a member of our campus radio station.
First of all,I have been proactively learning English for quite a few years as I love English very much.Likewise,I often listen to a series of English music and enjoy watching well-known English films.As I strongly believe that I have this kind of born-in interest and ability,I think I am quite qualified for this position.
Furthermore,I would like to have a continuous training on my oral English.I will be extremely happy if we have a chance to share happiness and sadness together,listen internationally-wide English song together,while you could hear my nice and sweet voice.Meanwhile,it is believed that broadcast will not only make everyone relaxed,but also will improve our English proficiency,especially the listening and oral skills.Therefore,campaigning for this position is undoubtedly the best choice for me and for you guys.
I strongly believe that,with my effort and your warm support,we could make radio station more perfect after I join in it.I hope you could give me this chance and I guarantee that I will put all my effort to the sustainable development of radio station onwards.Thank you very much.