英语过去进行时的小故事

Once upon a time,there was a little girl.Her name was Little Red Riding Hood.One day,her grandma was ill.Little Red Riding Hood went to visit her.On the way,she met a wolf.
That's a good idea.
Little Red Riding Hood,the flowers are so beautiful.Why not pick some?Help!Help!
The wolf went to her grandma's house and swallowed (吞下) her up whole.
What are you doing,dear grandma?
I'm just waiting to eat you,silly girl.
In grandma's house,Little Red Riding Hood found that grandma's ears,eyes and mouth were all very big.
The wolf jumped up and swallowed up Little Red Riding Hood.And then,he fell into a deep sleep.
Thank you,sir.
A hunter passed by.He killed the wolf and cut open its stomach.Little Red Riding Hood and her grandma were saved.
Last summer holiday,My family had gone to HongKong ,At the morning ,my father drive the car to Shenzhen,After the lunch,we take the car to HongKong,HongKong is a center of fanancial.There are many people in there,We just go shopping ,then ,we had a good dinner.
The next day ,we gone to the Ocean Park,it was very intersting and wonderful.The good expression was the informce of the dophin,They could save people,also could show many things.They are very smart!
I like HongKong very much