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With the development of Chinese economy ,we are becoming richer than
past and thus students are getting much more money from their parents.However
,it may not be good for students to have so much money for it could result in
their bad habit of wasting money,and in my opinion,it’s great to form the
habit of saving money.
On the one hand,saving money is a tradition our ancient leave us,in addition,it
is of great significance for us because even though we become richer,there are
poor families which need supports.Also,
saving money makes us feel secure since nobody knows what will happen in the
future,therefore it can be regarded as a kind of investment.On the other
hand,if students believe that using tomorrow’s money is good,they might use
money recklessly which can be a great waste.What’s worse,what if they cannot
earn enough to pay for themselves after they have habituate to this extravagant
way of using money
All in all,saving money does have lots of advantages.So it’s better to do ratherthan talk and start saving money
英语人气:944 ℃时间:2020-04-12 14:23:36
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留学党 纯手工

With the development of Chinese economy, we are becoming richer than
past. Thus students can getmuch more money from their parents. However, it may not be good for students to have so much money because it can result in
their bad habit of wasting money. In my opinion, it’s great to form the
habit of saving money.
On one hand, saving money is a tradition that our ancient left to us. It
has great significance for us because poor families still exist and they need monetary supports.In addition, saving money helps us to feel secure since nobody knows what will happen in the
future. Saving can be regarded as a kind of investment as well.
On the other
hand, if students believe that using tomorrow’s money is good, they might use
money recklessly which will lead to great waste. And even worse, if they cannot
earn enough money to pay off their bills, there will be a bubble economy.
In conlusion, saving money does have lots of advantages, So it’s better to do rather than talk and start saving money.
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