although there had a little interlude 应该是although there was a little interlude.
When I was a student in primary school 改成when I was a primary school student 会比较简洁,但也没错啦像你那样.
I was very afraid that father and mother will blame me应是I was afraid that my parents would blame me 要用would哇,very省略最好.
clarified my low result was just because of my carelessly clarified是什么?because of my carelessness才对.
Later ,my mother told me the result not mean all,draw lessons from it was more important这句应该有问题,至少我看不懂……可以改成my mother told me that we needn't care too much about the result,what we care more should be the life itself.
差不多了,估计你的同学们也找不出更多的错误了,good luck to you!
请英语高手们帮我看看这篇小作文中的语法错误
请英语高手们帮我看看这篇小作文中的语法错误
The unforgetful Experience in my Childhood
Generally speaking,my memory of childhood is sweet,although there had a little interlude occasionally ,which also made me happy when I think back..
When I was a student in primary school ,my achievements was in the forefront of the class,only one time,I test very bad ,I was very afraid that father and mother will blame me ,therefore I had not told the result matter to them,whenever they mentioned,I only said the result has not been announced.By coincidence,one day ,when my mother went to school to pick me up,then she had kown the whole thing .To my surprise ,she wasn’t angry ,just took me to my teacher,examined my test sheet,clarified my low result was just because of my carelessly rather than my lazy for studying .Later ,my mother told me the result not mean all,draw lessons from it was more important,which made me understood what’s the true meaning of study.
I must thank my mother for her tolerance.I pround of having the love of my parents.Just because of giving the good education by my parents,I had a joyful childhood full of the sunlight .I thought that I will not disappoint them,certainly will let my life be more splendid.
给我改改错误,时态和语法,要给全班看的,错太多了,好丢脸的,嘻嘻,
The unforgetful Experience in my Childhood
Generally speaking,my memory of childhood is sweet,although there had a little interlude occasionally ,which also made me happy when I think back..
When I was a student in primary school ,my achievements was in the forefront of the class,only one time,I test very bad ,I was very afraid that father and mother will blame me ,therefore I had not told the result matter to them,whenever they mentioned,I only said the result has not been announced.By coincidence,one day ,when my mother went to school to pick me up,then she had kown the whole thing .To my surprise ,she wasn’t angry ,just took me to my teacher,examined my test sheet,clarified my low result was just because of my carelessly rather than my lazy for studying .Later ,my mother told me the result not mean all,draw lessons from it was more important,which made me understood what’s the true meaning of study.
I must thank my mother for her tolerance.I pround of having the love of my parents.Just because of giving the good education by my parents,I had a joyful childhood full of the sunlight .I thought that I will not disappoint them,certainly will let my life be more splendid.
给我改改错误,时态和语法,要给全班看的,错太多了,好丢脸的,嘻嘻,
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