帮我看看这篇文章,是我自己写的,有什么不对的,请改正,谢啦.
帮我看看这篇文章,是我自己写的,有什么不对的,请改正,谢啦.
This year's winter is very different,because this year's winter so beautiful.From January the 18th,snow began to fall.Go where,we can see everything is putting on a coat.What colour is it?Of course is white!Open the window,looking at changxing,feel that everything is so beautiful.
每一处有错误的地方请指出来,并且讲清楚原因,而且要改正,
This year's winter is very different,because this year's winter so beautiful.From January the 18th,snow began to fall.Go where,we can see everything is putting on a coat.What colour is it?Of course is white!Open the window,looking at changxing,feel that everything is so beautiful.
每一处有错误的地方请指出来,并且讲清楚原因,而且要改正,
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1.this year's winter 不准确,汉语式.说成this year就可以了,或者 winter of this year/ 2.第二个this year就用it代替./ 3.From January the 18th,从11月18号开始,这是一个时间段,不能用短暂动词began,可以说it ha...
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