1. 时态不一致,应该都用一般现在时
2 标点用法有误.
3 steal 改为steal your dreams away更形象表示偷走,带走的意味.
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帮忙做个短文改错
“Everyone has a dream,somewhere inside your heart your dream lies waiting.Some say,as long as you study hard,you can achieve your dreams.Some people said,don't let anyone steal your dreams..I'm always on the persistent pursuit,why,because there was my dream”
“Everyone has a dream,somewhere inside your heart your dream lies waiting.Some say,as long as you study hard,you can achieve your dreams.Some people said,don't let anyone steal your dreams..I'm always on the persistent pursuit,why,because there was my dream”
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