英语好点的同学帮我看看这段话有没有语法错误~

英语好点的同学帮我看看这段话有没有语法错误~
Nowadays, people seem to hardly leaveelectronic products, especially in mobile phone.At the table, people from time to time to look at the cell phone. Everyoneignores each other. They missed the opportunity to talk and care about eachother. They forget the important of verbal communications. It can't be deniedthat electronic products are convenient but sometimes they are aloof.
Unforgettable wedding is every girl's dream.There are some differences between the Chinese wedding and the Western wedding.But they have the common point. The point is the couple absolutely don't wantto see a sea of down-turned faces staring at their LCD screens in theirwedding. In my mind, the wedding don't need many people but attendees must bemy close relations and friends. Every guest doesn't need to send any present,only need to send sincere blessings, that's enough. The wedding also don't needbigger and more luxury. Touching and sweet wedding is the best. I once watcheda wedding video. It really moved me .Maybe you will ask what moved me. I willtell you nothing just the couple's happiness and the guest's sincere blessing.At the beginning of thewedding, the guest sang a song for the couple. Then the couple swore an oath. Everyone's staredat the couple not the cell phone. You could see many people were moved totears.
Unplugged weddings are agood idea. Maybe in this way, the wedding can be not disturbed. Hey guys youcan try the unplugged weddings in the future. It's really new and meaningful.