帮我看看这篇英语作文有什么问题吧~（单词拼写和语法）【看图作文】

帮我看看这篇英语作文有什么问题吧~（单词拼写和语法）【看图作文】
第一副.沉迷网络,一个男孩子坐在电脑前,玩游戏,从7级升到8级,8级升9级
第二副.是小男孩骗他爸爸去同学家复习,其实去上网了
第三副.是他爸爸怕他看书累,做点心给他吃
第四副.是个大大问号
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Internet can teach you so many good things; but sometimes it could teach you bad things also.
There was a little boy who loves to play online games,he just couldn't help but keep playing that game.From lavel 7 to level 8,from level 8 to level 9,he kept getting better.
The little boy sometimes would lie to his dad,saying he's going to study at his friend's house,but he's actually going to play the online game.
However,his dad doesn't know,who made the little desert,and worried that the little boy would be "study" too hard!
Somehow,the little boy's dad will know his secret; but,who knows?
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