帮我看看这几句英文写的对不对

正确的:
Although private cars in modern society are glorified by many people,there are others who are especially critical of having private car when cartain things are carried to excess.
There are many reasons for it.The most important one of which,I would propose,is too many cars will lead to block.Additionally,private car is a contributing factor accounting for air pollution.
虽然在现代社会中,私家车受到大多数人的追捧,但是,在某些事物发展过头的时候,一些其他人对拥有私家车持特别的批评态度．
造成这种现象的原因有很多．我提出的最重要的原因是太多的私家车会导致交通阻塞．而且,私家车也是空气污染的诱发因素．