I was born in Beijing, and live (lived) in (in去掉) here ever since. Beijing is a big and flourishing city, live in(in去掉) there you need(need去掉) never feel bored. Because there are good restaurant, museum, amusement park(restaurant, museum, amusement park 都用复数) everywhere, and we also have a lot of shopping center(用复数), big hospital(用复数) and nice school(复数), so Beijing’s education, economic and health care are very advantaged, It bring(is) convenient to our live.
Every thing has to(two) sides, positive one and negative one. Beijing also has disadvantage. From park to street, every where is so crowded and bustling that it often has traffic jam and traffic accident. Beijing is also a pollution(polluted) city, air is not fresh, sky sometimes is gray, and seldom to see green trees and beautiful flowers, we worry about healthy problem all the time. In Beijing, every thing is expensive, if you don’t have enough money, you can’t buy anything, so everyone have(has) to working very hard and (加is)afraid losing their job.
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跪求大家看看这篇短文,然后帮小弟改改里面的病句、用得不当的词,或者觉得不好、别扭的地方.求求您们啦!I was born in Beijing,and live in here ever since.Beijing is a big and flourishing city,live in there you need never feel bored.Because there are good restaurant,museum,amusement park everywhere,and we also have a lot of shopping center,big hospital and nice school,so Beijing’s education,economic and health care are very advantaged,It bring convenient to our live.
Every thing has to sides,positive one and negative one.Beijing also has disadvantage.From park to street,every where is so crowded and bustling that it often has traffic jam and traffic accident.Beijing is also a pollution city,air is not fresh,sky sometimes is gray,and seldom to see green trees and beautiful flowers,we worry about healthy problem all the time.In Beijing,every thing is expensive,if you don’t have enough money,you can’t buy anything,so everyone have to working very hard and afraid losing their job.
跪求大家看看这篇短文,然后帮小弟改改里面的病句、用得不当的词,或者觉得不好、别扭的地方.求求您们啦!I was born in Beijing,and live in here ever since.Beijing is a big and flourishing city,live in there you need never feel bored.Because there are good restaurant,museum,amusement park everywhere,and we also have a lot of shopping center,big hospital and nice school,so Beijing’s education,economic and health care are very advantaged,It bring convenient to our live.
Every thing has to sides,positive one and negative one.Beijing also has disadvantage.From park to street,every where is so crowded and bustling that it often has traffic jam and traffic accident.Beijing is also a pollution city,air is not fresh,sky sometimes is gray,and seldom to see green trees and beautiful flowers,we worry about healthy problem all the time.In Beijing,every thing is expensive,if you don’t have enough money,you can’t buy anything,so everyone have to working very hard and afraid losing their job.
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