以中考水平来讲：
这篇英语小作文从字数和表达内容,用词搭配,逻辑衔接,切题程度 都算是中学生中写的不错的.而且结尾的名言有亮点.20分制,应该会给到18分及以上.
nobody likes dishonest people. 前面加上一个表示 因果关系的 "as"更衔接.
语法上无错误.
2007年上海英语中考作文：things i hate to do 看看有没有什么语法错误?改一改 如果总分20分,给几分
2007年上海英语中考作文：things i hate to do 看看有没有什么语法错误?改一改 如果总分20分,给几分
Most of the time i do things which i enjoy.However,there are still things i hate to do.（已给开头）
I`m always against smoking because i have suffered from it for several years.And i also hate to tell lies ,nobody likes dishonest people.But most of all ,i extremely hate to get tired of study.First,it does harm to the future.You will get failure only if you don't focus on your study.In addition ,That's a shame if you lose interest in study which consists of both difficuties and fun."Idleness is the root of all evil".this is the motto i never forget .
Most of the time i do things which i enjoy.However,there are still things i hate to do.（已给开头）
I`m always against smoking because i have suffered from it for several years.And i also hate to tell lies ,nobody likes dishonest people.But most of all ,i extremely hate to get tired of study.First,it does harm to the future.You will get failure only if you don't focus on your study.In addition ,That's a shame if you lose interest in study which consists of both difficuties and fun."Idleness is the root of all evil".this is the motto i never forget .
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