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Dear XXX
i have been doing quite well for my studies.I play sports occasionally in a sports hall near mu house.You might want to visit my place so that i can bring you to many places of interests where you can participates in various activies.The beverages(food and drinks) offered here are of a great variety,you will never regret eating the famous XXX in my hometowm.I personally like to eat bbq lamb stick as it tastes really nice.
I look forward to your reply
Thanks
XXX