From now I try to write diary in English有语法错误吗

From now I try to write diary in English有语法错误吗
From now I try to write diary in English
If you found something wrong you must tell me.
Because my English is poor.
I want to worked in Chartered Bank
So English is very importent.
I must study every day
although tried and diffcult but I carry through
then now I tell you a new word
Bankruptcy(means a man who lose own money)
In Chinese is 破产者
Ok
I feel sleepy.
Goodnight
zzZ
See you tomorrow,