求高手点评以下的英语作文.
求高手点评以下的英语作文.
Mr.Schoolmaster My name is Peter,Junior 2 student in our school.Nowadays,I made a report of the dream about our future work.Now,I want to show thie report to you.
In this report,there are 50 boys and the same number of girls join us.While 35% of grils wish to be a teacher and only 5 p-ercent of boys have the same dream.Also,there are 20% of girls and the same number of boys wish to be a doctor.But in becoming a businessman or businesswoman,there are only 5% of girls wish to be and 5 times in boys.Of course there ar-e a little people don't know what they will be.Only 5% in boys and the same number in girls.
So,I want to have your opinion and your suggestion.Thank you.
Mr.Schoolmaster My name is Peter,Junior 2 student in our school.Nowadays,I made a report of the dream about our future work.Now,I want to show thie report to you.
In this report,there are 50 boys and the same number of girls join us.While 35% of grils wish to be a teacher and only 5 p-ercent of boys have the same dream.Also,there are 20% of girls and the same number of boys wish to be a doctor.But in becoming a businessman or businesswoman,there are only 5% of girls wish to be and 5 times in boys.Of course there ar-e a little people don't know what they will be.Only 5% in boys and the same number in girls.
So,I want to have your opinion and your suggestion.Thank you.
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Dear Schoolmaster ,My name is Peter,a Junior 2 student in our school.I made a survey about the dream of our future career.Now,I want to show this survey report to you.In this report,it covered 50 boys...
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