写一篇英语作文,大家来帮下忙,

Shenzhen is a very beautiful place. It is a very commercialized place which is located in Guangdong Province. The famous software of QQ is produced in a company in Shenzhen. It is also a city that is full of places of interest such as Zhongshan Park and Zhongshan Funfair. That is why I recommend that you should go to Shenzhen.请再长一点，谢谢这字数已经够了。