英语文章查错

英语文章查错
With the popularization of the Internet,e-commerce platform has become the majority of consumers shopping preferred,small to large hat and footwear to furniture home appliances can be easily purchased from the online platform.Patrons can easily click the mouse to an affordable price to purchase to your favorite products.But what lies behind this transaction success also requires efficient logistics industry as a platform,currently the leading logistics industry transport + warehouse status,more accurate to say our logistics industry freight forwarding logistics at the primary stage,just simple point to point operation,that is,put a piece of cargo transportation from departure to the destination.Outside the natural conditions,human factors,etc.for this industry is very large,you experience sudden disaster weather,holidays of adjustments result in goods not on time,or the cargo of the phenomenon,lost,damaged goods more is not uncommon.These situations of important reason is the logistics enterprises cannot accurately know the specific location of your vehicle,the driver could not be kept in touch with,anytime,cannot supply for their organization and flexible organization picking.At the same time,the driver can only rely on personal experience to determine routes,find the best path cannot be,not only delays the shipping cycle also increased operating costs.In addition,actual customers are not current with delivery of the actual situation,could not coordinate logistics enterprises.However for foreign logistics companies and customers of this issue has been an effective solution.The timeliness of delivery of goods to within a minute,the transport of goods in the whole process has detailed information and data available to the user,in which a comprehensive range of services behind this state-of-the-art GPS navigation technology undeniable.
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