概述上海的英语作文

Shanghai is a very beautiful city with its fast-growing economy and hospitable people.
There are many historic sites in Shanghai, such as the residence of Luxun and Song qinglin. Besides, a lot of changes have taken place in the city. For example, many highrises have been built around us and people are living a richer life than ever. what's more, Shanghai citizens are very nice to anyone coming to visit the city. They will show you around the city and introduce the best tourist sites in Shanghai to make sure you will live a happy life there.
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