英语翻译

I have an interest in management, and i have decided to enter a multinational company engaged in administration, i want to become a corporate manager. To become a successful manager, one has to start from the very beginning and work their way up, adding knowledge and experience on their way and expand their social circle. After all this, they will reach self-perfection. One who tries, gets. I believe that everyone's destiny is in their own hands!

楼上的看得出来是翻译的,有许多翻译机会出的错.