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When one is in love he or she will have different behaviors.
Are you in love now or before?Is there anyone at your side in love now or before?If there is,observe their behaviors carefully,and you will see a very interesting thing——when one is in love he or she will have different behaviors.
For instance,my younger female cousin,she is in high school now.In my memory,she is an introverted girl,she is always very quiet.But last month when I met her,she is very sociable!She began to like to join the crowd suddenly.And there’s a bright light in her eyes.I’m amazed.I asked her what happened to her?She shares me with good news that she is in love.Whenever somebody falls in love you can see from his face,from his eyes,that he is no longer the same person -- something has transformed.
Another instance is there's some people by my side,they always giggle when they are in love.And they constantly wander with a face of a happy face.But they never do these things before.When I am in love,I think I become more sensitive.I always cry for a little thing.
Why people have different behaviors?The reason is probably love.When you are in love your whole being is transformed.