How to follow the traffic rules作文60字左右

Every year many people get hurt or lose their lives in traffic accident.How can we obey the traffic rules?First,in most of China,we keep on the right of the road.Second,before we cross the road,we must stop and look both ways—look left,look right and look left again.Third,we must don’t play on the street.
Last,it’s good to help children and old people crossthe road.
2.in traffic accident ,事故很多,用复数形式比较好traffic accidents
3.How can we obey the traffic rules?译为“我们们如何能够遵守交通规则”,上下句联系欠佳,可以换成以下几种形式：
how can we cut down (decrease /avoid /prevent) this?I think we should obey the traffic rules.
或者That is why we should obey the traffic rules.（这就是我们为什么要遵守交通规则的原因)
that is why.“这就是.的原因"
或：What should we do to avoid this?i think we shoud obey these traffic rules.
4.we keep on the right of the road.换成we should keep right when walking along the road.
keep right 靠右
5.we must stop and look both ways .表示看的方向时最好用direction,换成we must stop and look both directions
6.Third,we must don’t play on the street.语法错误,换成：Third,we mustn’t play on the street.表示禁止做…
7.Last,it’s good to help children and old people cross the road.
英语时间顺序的表达应该是：first,second,then,at last / finally；last换成at last 或者finally
it’s good to do sth.和 help sb (to) do sth：to可以省略,这两个句型结构用的好,表达清楚,简洁.
参考例句(文)
1.how can we cut down (decrease /avoid /prevent) this?
2.That is why we should obey the traffic rules.（这就是我们为什么要遵守交通规则的原因)
3.What should we do to avoid this?i think we shoud obey these traffic rules.
4.we should keep right when walking along the road.
5.we mustn’t play on the street