英语作文An E-mail to my penfriend

Dear Kathy:
My name is Betty.I'm a student,I am studying in a Primary School.My favorite subject is history.My favourite colour is Pink.My hobbies are reading books,painting and swimming.I have a cat called Penny,it's so cute!I really want to be your pen friend,hope to hear from you soon!
Truly yours
Betty
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亲爱的凯西：
我的名字是贝蒂.我是一名学生.我现在在上小学.我最喜欢的课程是历史,我最喜欢粉红色.我的爱好是读书,画画和游泳.我养了只猫叫佩妮,它很可爱哦!我很想和你交朋友,希望能得到你的回复.
你的
贝蒂
参考资料：我英语很棒哦!我现在在英国,这个是我写的后来一个老外给改的.以后再有这种问题给我发消息哈!