请英语达人帮忙分析一下下面的句子成分

句子主干：
only by ...can we make sure ...
状语：Only by futher developing the way
in which we manage our societies
其中：in which ...引导了定语从句,先行词the way
主谓：can we make sure
宾语：that those currently not in control of globalization
make sure their voise heard in the political processes
affacting the range of their own personal choise.
其中：make sure 为 those 的谓语
affacting ...为 political processes 的定语
试译：
只有进一步通过我们管理社会的方式,我们才能够确定
那些在全球化中处于非主导地位的（公司）,在影响他们自己个人选择范围的政治过程中,能够让别人听见他们的声音.