英语作文,因为以前没好好学语法,所以很纠结,希望来个好心人帮我纠正下错误,谢谢.

英语作文,因为以前没好好学语法,所以很纠结,希望来个好心人帮我纠正下错误,谢谢.
题目是书本是否应该被电脑取代?
There is no doubt that Internet is a very important part of our daily life.Some people think that the books shoud be banished.As the books go,more and more people don't like read it.They think use computer should more convenient than reading books.
For my part,I hold the point of view that books shouldn't be banished,because books can help us become a man of considenable culture.Those minds can't be instead of computer.
Secondly,books are traditional culture. There aer have some culture put down in writing.
All in all,not only are we live in a modern life,but also there are many things convenient than the past.We still remreber the traditional culture